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Ancient Egypt

Entombed…Resurrection…Unbound….

February 19, 2016 by fpdorchak

These prose poems I did for Hallowe’en in 2012. I tried to do something every week for that month that year, trying to get into the Hallowe’en spirit, and I did—and it was fun! When I created these, I’d challenged myself to write one a week “off the cuff,” with no planning. I had a basic idea of what I’d wanted…thinking back to my favorite mummy movies and lore…and sat down once a week for three weeks and just wrote what came out of me….

Instead of again serializing these, here are all three of them together.

 

 

Entombed

No Passing

No Time

Only Now…

A life to painfully pine

 

No cherished sound

Nary a precious peep

No Human touch

Only deeply troubled sleep

 

The weight of antiquity

Crush of stone

Wrapped and tightly bound

I, forever alone

 

Profane death

Ancient desiccation

I eternally atone

A heinous transgression

 

Within Ba enslaved

My Ka everlastingly to pay

Darkness, imprisonment

This tomb within which I lay

 

Dreams of lands

Dreams of much

Freedom, exotic scents

A silken, tender touch

 

Flesh against flesh

Heart against heart

My love for another

Us One, torn apart

 

Dreams of wind

Sounds it makes

Through breezy palms

Its balmy path takes

 

Forever to dream

Forever to yearn

Forever to remember

This anguish I’ve earned

 

There is only now!

My life to pine!

Oh, agonized passing!

Eternally, endless Time….

 

Rise!

Resurrection

Weight of Silence

Density of Confinement

Eternal damnation

My immortal pronouncement

 

Unable to breathe

Never to move

Yet comes from above

Abominations to prove!

 

I stir!

 

I rise!

 

I push off centuries

Against all choice

I am awakened

Strange magic, strange voice

 

Resistant to movement

I exit my sentence

That into which I awaken

A land of no acquaintance

 

I go where I know not

Without consideration

I go where I’m beckoned

Imprisoned, another iteration

 

Bound as I am

In ancient tatters I hang

Movement I am bidden

Insulting life that once sang

 

The shuffling the dragging

The unyielding yoke

To others am I sent

And commanded to choke

 

Heavy my heart!

Bloody my tide!

Forced to take lives

To which I have strived!

 

Control I have not

Miss my dreams and my sleep

Thee who awaken me

I wish not company keep

 

Their bidding I do

But know here, know true

Thee who has clutched me

I am coming for you.

 

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Unbound

Tortured and aching

Relentless my quest

The bidding of another

Endless unrest!

 

As I shuffle and I let

This blood that I spill

Stronger I grow

More powerful my will

 

I cannot continue!

Unrelenting murder!

My captor has controlled me

But this time no longer!

 

He commands, he directs

I do, I turn

But this time is different

His dominion I spurn!

 

He shouts and invokes

Fights and he strikes

But in the end crippled

My might is what frights

 

I dispatch as I have

To all dead before him

Then turn to a flame

And insert my forelimb

 

I cannot return

Now free from possession

To once again anguish

In my ancient obsession

 

I give up my being

Once and for all

By my own hand do it

Oh, will of gods befall

 

Free!

 

I am released!

Into the afterlife fly

I find my true love

And in her arms

Die.

 

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Filed Under: Leisure, Metaphysical, Reincarnation, Short Story, Spooky, To Be Human, Writing Tagged With: Ancient Egypt, Desert, Egypt, Hallowe'en, Horror, Mummies, The Undead

The Mummy (1932)

October 30, 2013 by fpdorchak

Sir Joseph Whemple: [translating inscription on Scroll of Thoth box] “Death…eternal punishment…for…anyone…who…opens…this…casket. In the name…of Amon-Ra…the king of the gods. Good heavens, what a terrible curse!

Ralph Norton: [eagerly] Well, let’s see what’s inside!

I love this movie!

The above clip is my favorite scene in the entire film…I love the absolute subtly of it! The slow, weary opening of the mummy’s eyes as it’s

English: The Mummy (1932) film poster.
English: The Mummy (1932) film poster. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

being summoned back to life (the eye is opened sooo slow!)…the movement of the hands away from the chest…the dessicated hand entering the scene to touch the scroll…the sloughing away into the darkness by only showing the trailing mummy wrappings (and at a mummy’s gait!)…and the gone-mad stare and laughter from our forever traumatized “Oxford chap” archeologist, Ralph Norton (Bramwell Fletcher)!

“He went for a little  walk! You should have seen his face!”

I love the whole black-and-white atmosphere, the story partially inspired by the real Tutankhamun (or -amen) discovery in 1922. I love how much is left to the imagination through use of light and dark…shadows. Implication.

And then there’s the line uttered by Zita Johann and made famous by a Rob Zombie song: “Do you have to open graves to find girls to fall in love with?”

Ah, the eternal question for some!

Click here for some additional The Mummy info.

The above link mentioned there was a reincarnational scene deleted from the movie. The slideshow creator (see “Reincarnation Deleted Scense” slideshow video, below) said there had been downright animosity between the director, Carl Freund and Zita Johann (who played Helen Grosvenor), hinting that might have played a part in the removal of the scenes. I wonder if it may have taken movie goers “out” of the movie, the “mummy atmosphere” that had already been created. There is also a scene where David Manners (Frank Whemple character) tells Zita/Helen, in the scene where Zita is brought to the elder Whemple’s home and couch that there was something about “her head” (“I say…now, I know what it is about you…there was something about her head…”) and the head of the discovered mummy of Princess Anck-es-en-Amon…implying she’s got the same body (and head…face…) as the ancient Egyptian princess…while in the deleted scenes there are different actresses playing some of her different reincarnations. I know about the ideas of reincarnation for both the souls taking on new bodies, but also keeping various “versions” of their previous bodies (and every variant in between)…but it could have been a problematic issue, just the same. Anyway, for me, watching this slideshow had a “weird feel” to it, perhaps it was the contemporary video composer’s composition…including music and included contemporary slides to complete the deleted tale…but I’m not sure it would have lent anything “more” to the movie. Who knows….

In any event, here is the slideshow, showing some of those deleted scenes (again, intermixed with more contemporary scenes for “completeness” sake, I can only assume):

The only drawback (and it’s a minor one) I can find to the movie is that there aren’t many mummy-in-wraps scenes beyond the opening (minus the flashback). However, in direct contrast to that statement, I do love how the film transcends the mummy-ness into a character who interacts with the living, beyond deadly brute force! So, there lies the dichotomy. There are other mummy movies I love, like the Christopher Lee version, where he stays-as-mummy and terrorizes, but this 1932 film, with its “intelligent” script, remains at the top of my list!

And, lastly, enjoy this 1957 Boris Karloff, This Is Your Life, interview:

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Filed Under: Leisure, Metaphysical, Reincarnation, Spooky, To Be Human Tagged With: Ancient Egypt, Archaeology, Boris Karloff, Bramwell Fletcher, Christopher Lee, David Manners, Egypt, Hallowe'en, Mummies, Mummy, Tutankhamun, Zita Johann

Ramses III…Murdered!

December 22, 2012 by fpdorchak

English: Head of mummy of pharaoh Ramesses III...
English: Head of mummy of pharaoh Ramses III. Русский: Голова мумии фараона Рамсеса III. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I came across this interesting article the other day, about how it now appears that Ramses III was murdered—by his son, Prince Pentawere, as led by one of Ramses III’s wives, secondary queen Tiye. Ramses III was taken out by a very nasty and deep slice across his throat. Details are in the article. According to the article, ancient texts also suggest Pentawere was found guilty of the assassination at a trial and had subsequently taken his own life. His body has never been definitively identified.

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Filed Under: History, Just Plain Weird Tagged With: Ancient Egypt, Egypt, Mummies, Prince Pentawere, Ramses III, Secondary Queen Tiye

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